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Oh, someday,
I would love to commit the act,
The act so set on my mind.
I want to commit the act
Of social suicide.
I want to be strung up
By a rainbow dyed rope.
I wish I could shout to the world
What's on my mind.
How I just want to tell
Everyone I know.
But I can't
Because I'm scared.
I know I should be proud of who I am,
But what if others
Aren't proud of what I am?
So I keep to myself,
Until one day
When I am ready to hang by my rainbow rope.
ok... i wrote this today after my chem test! i wrote it because i read this poem... [link] ... and i felt like it. so, i'm still trying to discover a lot about myself... but it's a lot harder than i thought, so i just write my feelings down, and this came out :D

i hope you enjoy... but if you don't... then oh well
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:iconkumoko-tei:
Kumoko-Tei Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011  Student General Artist
I just re-read this and I wish I could "Super-favorite" something.
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Ze-Russian Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2011
Oh, well thanks (:
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Oshini Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010
Ugh, I definitely feel this way, too. Hopefully, we'll someday soon find the courage to be honest and open without fear.
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Ze-Russian Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2010
Yeah. Well, I want to wish you the best of luck with your search. :)
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soundtrack67 Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2010
I love it, it's full of heart
I really like the rainbow rope idea
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Ze-Russian Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2010
thanks!
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StrykeWolf Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2010
me 2 eh, good luck :)
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Ze-Russian Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2010
thanks!
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MamaCockroach Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Don't worry so much, worry will only cloud your mind.
Trust me, I know how you feel, over thinking, and worrying will cause more pain on your part.
All you have to do, is go with how you feel, and love who you are :D

I liked the poem BTW
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Ze-Russian Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2010
Thanks. I'm trying to do the whole not worrying thing and hopefully I'll be there soon. Thanks for your advice!
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MamaCockroach Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2010  Hobbyist Writer
Your welcome, all the luck to you!
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Harmon20 Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010
Wow... this is so true... 6.6; I really feel like this right now.

great job c:
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:iconze-russian:
Ze-Russian Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2010
thanks :)
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Miscomunication Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
this is the same for me
maybe i'll wait till i find someone
THEN
if people disagree with us
i can explain in detail how stupid they are and how they dont know what love is
and if they doi bet its only a gonna last a few days
:)
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:iconze-russian:
Ze-Russian Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010
yeah. thanks for the fave :D
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Miscomunication Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
my pleasure
^W^
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Sizab Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
Social suicide... I love the way you put that. :heart:
I like the tone of this, it's gloomy and sad, but there's hope at the end for the narrator, they can always choose to commit the act.
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:iconze-russian:
Ze-Russian Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2010
thank you, and thanks for the fav =)
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:iconsizab:
Sizab Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2010  Student Traditional Artist
You're very welcome! :3
Ha Ha, llama trade.
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:iconze-russian:
Ze-Russian Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2010
well, thanks for my llama then :D
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kdid87 Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
y is u yayin?
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:iconze-russian:
Ze-Russian Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
hmm... idk... i guess i'm in a yay-ish mood... but its really good... cause i'm almost never in yay-ish moods!
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:iconkdid87:
kdid87 Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
ok? well i hope you have fun in ur yay-ish mood lol... i wish i where in one
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:iconze-russian:
Ze-Russian Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
oh, i is sowwy!

:hug:
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kdid87 Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
thx :/ its ok i have weird mood swings between ok and lonely i want a gf BAD
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Ze-Russian Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
o my goodness!!! i know exactly what you mean!!!
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kdid87 Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
ya the wrid thing is is the year i really want a gf is when is when two guys i know ask me out..... dont u hate it wanting a gf sooooo bad
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Ze-Russian Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
yes, it is a thing to hate!

haha, i was asked out this year... didnt go to well, lulz
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kdid87 Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
wow that is a stupid fortune cookie hehehe but dont trust the fortune cookie dont let others run your life
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Ze-Russian Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
haha, i won't...

:iconimhappyplz:
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kdid87 Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
:) good
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Ze-Russian Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
yay

:iconiloveitplz:
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kdid87 Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
do what you want dont listen to what others say (bout anything) i mean it probably would have been kinda mean to tell him that but i mean it would have been kinda funny
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Ze-Russian Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
haha, okie dokes... but thats not what my fortune cookie said tonight!!! haha, it was the worst fortune cookie ever, it pretty much said to give into peer pressure... haha
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kdid87 Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
well i hope things work out well for you when u come out you may just have to let it be one of those sper the moment type things :)
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Ze-Russian Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
haha, it might be... i had a boyfriend... for two days and i almost told him that he turned me gay... but i was told that that would be me, haha
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Kumoko-Tei Featured By Owner May 1, 2010  Student General Artist
Oh wow... This is simply amazing. Mindblowing.

I hope you don't mind, but I'm going to submit this to a group I know.

Sometimes though, impulses get us put places we don't want to be by people we didn't know had influence... That doesn't mean it isn't so so very worth it.
Weigh the consequences carefully and do it at just the right time.
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Ze-Russian Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
tehe, thanksies

and i don't mind at all

haha, ok... i probably wont come out anytime soon... i'll probably wait til college cause i'm such a wimp... haha... but o well, thanks for the awesome comment and fave becs!!! you rock... tehe :D
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Kumoko-Tei Featured By Owner May 1, 2010  Student General Artist
Haha, thank you!

Well, whenever it happens, it'll hopefully be great.
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Ze-Russian Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
i hope it will be... but i'll still wait ;)
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:iconkumoko-tei:
Kumoko-Tei Featured By Owner May 1, 2010  Student General Artist
Well, that'll make it all the more rewarding.
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Ze-Russian Featured By Owner May 2, 2010
haha, i hope so!
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kdid87 Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2010
i like it its how i feel too nice writing
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Ze-Russian Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
thank you :D
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kdid87 Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
np :) when do u think youll be ok with commiting it?
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Ze-Russian Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
i have no idea yet... hopefully i'll be strong enough to do it soon :D
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kdid87 Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
it takes time dont do it unless your ready
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Ze-Russian Featured By Owner May 1, 2010
haha, okie dokes... i'm probably gonna wait a while, so i'm hoping that it'll all work out then
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